Nomoxian has just posted a new review of Exmormon!!!
The only comment I'll add is that yet another person has pointed out that there are too many characters, and that makes the story a little hard to follow at times. But I've learned my lesson!!! So for all of you following the story online, don't forget that I've provided visual character charts that you can refer to if ever you're reading along and catch yourself saying "Wait a minute, who was that person again...?"